初中口语自我介绍,请修改My name is Li Yishen.I'm fourteen years old.I am from class two-five-nine.And my favoride hobby is reading novel.I also like playing computer games,but I don't like sport.So I am a little fat ,but I don't think it is
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![初中口语自我介绍,请修改My name is Li Yishen.I'm fourteen years old.I am from class two-five-nine.And my favoride hobby is reading novel.I also like playing computer games,but I don't like sport.So I am a little fat ,but I don't think it is](/uploads/image/z/12843748-28-8.jpg?t=%E5%88%9D%E4%B8%AD%E5%8F%A3%E8%AF%AD%E8%87%AA%E6%88%91%E4%BB%8B%E7%BB%8D%2C%E8%AF%B7%E4%BF%AE%E6%94%B9My+name+is+Li+Yishen.I%27m+fourteen+years+old.I+am+from+class+two-five-nine.And+my+favoride+hobby+is+reading+novel.I+also+like+playing+computer+games%2Cbut+I+don%27t+like+sport.So+I+am+a+little+fat+%2Cbut+I+don%27t+think+it+is)
初中口语自我介绍,请修改My name is Li Yishen.I'm fourteen years old.I am from class two-five-nine.And my favoride hobby is reading novel.I also like playing computer games,but I don't like sport.So I am a little fat ,but I don't think it is
初中口语自我介绍,请修改
My name is Li Yishen.I'm fourteen years old.I am from class two-five-nine.And my favoride hobby is reading novel.I also like playing computer games,but I don't like sport.So I am a little fat ,but I don't think it is bad.Because happy is the best!
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初中口语自我介绍,请修改My name is Li Yishen.I'm fourteen years old.I am from class two-five-nine.And my favoride hobby is reading novel.I also like playing computer games,but I don't like sport.So I am a little fat ,but I don't think it is
1,And my favoride hobby is reading novel.
这句话可改为I enjoy reading novels.
2,So I am a little fat ,but I don't think it is bad.Because happy is the best!
改为Though I am a little fat ,I don't think it is bad.Because I think to be happy is the most important!
years old 不要,多余! class two-five-nine什么意思,hobby不要修饰了,把前面那个次不要。最后那个BUT不要,
My name is Li Yishen. I'm fourteen years old. I am from class two-five-nine and my favorite hobby is reading novels.I also like playing computer games,but I don't like sports. I am a little fat ,but I don't think it bad.Because happiness is the best!
把favorite去掉,与hobby重复
novels
happy--happiness